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fornever the same by ~kaitwho:iconkaitwho:



something about you has changed
i can see it in your eyes
now they look like stormy seas
when they used to look like open sky.
something about you is different
i can smell it on your skin
you used to smell of untamed innocence
now you smell of fresh cut sin.
something about you isn't the same
i can hear it in your voice
once you sounded like novel romance
now you sound like you have no choice.
but you have left me only wondering
should i go or should i stay
do you need me more than ever
or ought i be on my way?
©2009 ~kaitwho
:iconkaitwho:

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:iconjoni-lynne:
kait this one's so pretty too. haha sorry i always leave such lame comments on all your poems but they really are beautiful; i don't even have critique for them or anything.
this one seems more song-ish than the others. like i could picture it being lyrics.


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jer 29:11.
:iconkaitwho:
thanks! i wanted to call it for(n)ever the same but you can't use parenthesis in titles!! grrr

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