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he said, "i'd like to die in the darkness
with my last breath just a sigh
so my soul would rise up gently
through the star-freckled sky."
but i said, "dear you don't mean that
no, it can't be so.
for the time to die is obvious -
day is the time to go.
i'd want to pass in the dazzling sun
in the pursuit of what i love
i want to die searching for beauty
like a moth in a flame - not a dove.
i'd rather be devoured by passion
than without a fight while asleep in my bed
i'd rather live life till the final second-
cause i'll rest when i'm dead.
for no one ever recalls
those who die at night, content
i swear i'll spend all my breaths with you, my love
on this - i am hell-bent."
©2009 ~kaitwho
:iconkaitwho:

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my poem.

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:iconjoni-lynne:
oh my freakin goodness, kait!
this is so incredible!
seriously, i love it. it makes me want to cry.
and i love how the whole thing is like a conversation. it makes it that much better.
i don't even know what to say, but i love it

:love:


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jer 29:11.
:iconkaitwho:
thank you joni <3
:iconjoni-lynne:
of course!
say, do you want me to make you a spiffy dA icon?
i have no life, and its fun for me, haha.


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jer 29:11.
:iconkaitwho:
that would be awesome :)) <--- note the fat smiley face haha
:iconjoni-lynne:
haha yay! :)) <<
and what's up with it being fat?


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jer 29:11.
:iconkaitwho:
it represents how fat i'll be when field hockey is over and i'm not running anymore haha ;)

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